Literacy Narrative

     For my portfolio I have decided to revise our first paper we wrote in this class, the literacy narrative. In this revision piece I am working on improving organization and ideas of my previous paper. I have chosen this paper as the one I want to revise because I think it is the one paper that I think I could really develop more on and turn in a better outcome than before.

     One of my traits of good writing that I want to improve is organization. This is because one of the main comments you wrote on my final draft was to organize the timeline of events better and collapse the time spread of events in my story. Another trait is the ideas in my paper. I feel like their are so many more things I can add into this narrative to make the story more vivid and have more of an effect on the readers about my reading experiences. I know, I now know way more about the good traits of writing than I did at the beginning of the year and I think I can make this paper a great edition to my portfolio.